smallville Justice League Unlimited

My first ever clois fic and this is an AU taking place after season 8's episode "Bride". I would REALLY like some feedback!! thanks!! :)<3


Chapter 1: The Lois Factor


She crawled into tempat tidur as tears rolled down her cheeks. She just lay there choking back sobs; feeling paralyzed as memories of that hari came rushing back to her with a whirlwind of heartbreak. Her cover had been blown, she could no longer pretend she didn’t have feelings for the dorky farm boy when all she wanted to do was run her hands through his thick dark hair and ciuman him. Her hands gripped her blanket tight as she thought...

As the Dam was about to burst, Lex watched as the water washed the police car he was in into the water. Fighting to stay alive, Lex saw an angelic girl (Kara) in the river, and she later saved him oleh bringing him to shore. Lex managed to catch a glimpse of her as she then flew off. Lex was found later and decided to turn himself in. Lex was approached oleh Bizarro in need of finding Clark and killing him. Lex admitted his crime and went to jail..
Lex was released from jail because one of his co-workers who had cancer admitted to the crime but didn't really do it so he has a meeting with the mysterious...