This might be bad I'm a girl so I have to think like a boy and I don't have any brothers so It's kinda hard thxs for the awsome comments
Adam's pov
She layed on the tempat tidur ,no sound came from her except her jantung beat and her breathing. Her bronse hair was in a mess tangled around her face , her black dress was torn and her feet wear beruang (Jane removed her shose she wanted them) I wanted to reach out in to mind to control her dreams .It was fun to control and change mortals dreams they never knew how it happen and it would feel like I was dreaming again. I reached out to place myself in her dream to find she was dreaming of a tall native American boy with long black hair."Jacob ?" she berkata "oh Jacob" she ran into his arm and was crushed in a beruang hug."Jacob I've missed anda so much I'm so sorry I have no idea what this must have put anda thorgh" she cryed she leaned in to ciuman him I couldn't wach I had to do something . I paniced and change this 'Jacob' person in to me
Adam's pov
She layed on the tempat tidur ,no sound came from her except her jantung beat and her breathing. Her bronse hair was in a mess tangled around her face , her black dress was torn and her feet wear beruang (Jane removed her shose she wanted them) I wanted to reach out in to mind to control her dreams .It was fun to control and change mortals dreams they never knew how it happen and it would feel like I was dreaming again. I reached out to place myself in her dream to find she was dreaming of a tall native American boy with long black hair."Jacob ?" she berkata "oh Jacob" she ran into his arm and was crushed in a beruang hug."Jacob I've missed anda so much I'm so sorry I have no idea what this must have put anda thorgh" she cryed she leaned in to ciuman him I couldn't wach I had to do something . I paniced and change this 'Jacob' person in to me
Adam's pov
I ran tracing Renesmee's sent when I found her laying on the floor infrount of Aro.I bowed my head and told him I was taking her back to the room,he told me to proceedbut to never let her out again.I tryed to pull her up after Aro left but she wouldn't move,I looked at her face to find her eyes closed. I picked her up and carried her back to the room and layed her on the tempat tidur .Would she be mad if I just looked in her dream to see what was happening.
Renesmee's pov
I was back in the hall but in wasn't that girl I ran into it was mom " honey were are you" she asked looking around me " mom I'm right here the Volturi kiddnapped me please mom tell dad " I yelled after her as she faded away "NNOOOOOOOOOOOOO MOOMM PLEASEE DON'T GOOOOOOOOO"I yelled
I ran tracing Renesmee's sent when I found her laying on the floor infrount of Aro.I bowed my head and told him I was taking her back to the room,he told me to proceedbut to never let her out again.I tryed to pull her up after Aro left but she wouldn't move,I looked at her face to find her eyes closed. I picked her up and carried her back to the room and layed her on the tempat tidur .Would she be mad if I just looked in her dream to see what was happening.
Renesmee's pov
I was back in the hall but in wasn't that girl I ran into it was mom " honey were are you" she asked looking around me " mom I'm right here the Volturi kiddnapped me please mom tell dad " I yelled after her as she faded away "NNOOOOOOOOOOOOO MOOMM PLEASEE DON'T GOOOOOOOOO"I yelled
Jacob lead me into the school yard behind the gym "you look beautiful under the moon light" he told me. I rested my head on his shoulder as we continued dancing,untill I head a loud , booming vocie from behind us say "how lovly I hope we'er not inturupting any thing".I turned at the sound of Aro's vocie to see he had brought Jance and Alec.
"What do anda want?"I asked turning to face him "you , anda stupid girl" Jane replied . I fell on the floor in pain ,"what did anda do to her" Jacob demanded looking down at me as I layed on the floor parlized in pain."Nothing anda should worry about , mongrule we'er taking her back with us" was the last thing I heard Jane say befor I fell into oncountionsness.
"What do anda want?"I asked turning to face him "you , anda stupid girl" Jane replied . I fell on the floor in pain ,"what did anda do to her" Jacob demanded looking down at me as I layed on the floor parlized in pain."Nothing anda should worry about , mongrule we'er taking her back with us" was the last thing I heard Jane say befor I fell into oncountionsness.
