What do anda think of this short speech I wrote?

Okay, so I was going through my jawaban on my profil page and I came across this one answer I made. Someone asked me what I thought of the issue of child abuse, and I wrote a speech which I thought was pretty impressive (not to be stuck-up atau anything, lol), but no one else answered and she never komentar to say if she agreed with me atau liked it. So I decided to copy it, make a question, paste it here, and see if anda guys like it.

Here it is;

I ABSOLUTELY DESPISE IT...
Child abuse is one of the most dispicable crimes in the world, in my opinion. Why would anda want to harm a young, innocent child? No matter what he atau she has done, they do not deserve to be abused. There is a thin but clear, definite line between punishment and abuse; spanking and put in a time-out chair atau corner is suitable discipline, but beating a child with a cord, slamming them into walls, burning them with cigarettes, atau even worse is ABUSE and nothing but ABUSE. Children deserve to live childhoods in peace and harmony. Our children should live in a world of happiness and love, not in a world filled with hurt and shame....

What do anda think? :)