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I need some book help

I'm menulis a two stories right now and I need some help with them.

What I have so far for the first one is that almost everyone on Earth is somehow destroyed. The few people left on Earth (ten people-5 boys and 5 girls) meet each other over the internet and end up meeting. They create clones of themselves to repopulate the planet. Basically what happens is each of them are cloned five times. There are now fifty people on Earth. since there is an even amount of boys and girls the pairing works perfectly. Each couple is only required to have one child. There are now 75 people on Earth. 25 of them have to reproduce. Of course now there is not an even amount of boys and girls. The others protect them until they are 14 and then tell them they have to reproduce. They choose 20 of them- 10 boys and 10 girls. There are now 95 people on Earth. This continues until Earth is repopulated.

What I need help with:
Names- Just daftar as many male and female names as anda can
Plot- I'm pretty confused with my own plot, could anda all give me suggestions and point out any mistakes atau plot holes?
Math- Any mistakes?


The detik plot:
The world is powered oleh a simulation. We are controlled from someone's couch. A group of kids find out and begin trying to find a way to control what happens. They write messages to the person controlling us oleh vandalizing walls. They lock themselves in rooms and refuse to leave. Some people try flying in a rocket to find where the person is viewing them from. The connection to Earth is lost and they do not return to Earth. One boy begins menulis letters to the person controlling the game. He assumes since he controls most of their actions he can see them. He ends up convincing him to unplug the game and everyone in the game is killed.

What I need help with:
Names- Again just daftar names
Plot- Any mistakes
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panisepic said:
I'm pretty much just going to ask about the plots, as far as names goes, try flipping through a phone book until anda find something anda like??

Fist story
Lemme get this straight the Earth is DESTROYED but internet connection is still running smoothly? How nice. Secondly, again the Earth is DESTROYED, and these peoples first objective is to repopulate the Earth. The Earth is destroyed shouldn't they be finding food to feed all these people? Shelter? Maybe even trying to figure why the Earth got destroyed. Also if the Earth is destroyed, and everything on it dead, what are they protecting them from? Also with the Earth being destroyed, the Earth is destroyed, everything gone, except that these people are able to break into what I can only assume would be a heavily secured lab and get a cloning machine that somehow survived the destruction of the planet. Clones usually don't survive, here's a link if anda want to know lebih about cloning link I'm assuming this is taking place in the distant future, so I guess anda could get away with saying that cloning has been perfected? I think anda really need to work on how this all even makes sense if the Earth is destroyed, as that would imply that everything on it is also destroyed. Maybe instead anda should try looking at it from a "human race is destroyed" view atau something. Right now this all really doesn't make any sense if the Earth has been destroyed.

detik Story
If they are being controlled, that would imply they have no free will. They wouldn't be able to do any of the things anda just listed unless the controller told them to. In order to do this anda would have to have like 1 kid somehow gain freewill and he would have to fight the controller (Like in The Giver atau smth anda ever read that?). I feel like in this story you're trying to imply that the "controller" is god and we are all "pawns in the game of life" and in the end we all die/ "game over". I think if anda are in fact trying to make that big of an analogy with this story it'll take a lot of work and revision, it would be interesting.
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Thank anda for your answer, it helped me think about my stories. As atau the first book I was just unclear about the plot. Earth is not destroyed, the humans on Earth are. It is set in the future, so that's why the clones are ok. Thanks for the link though. I'm thinking it might just be the human race being destroyed- they need to be protected from other things living there. A lot of the plot is also them trying to find food, shelter, etc.
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As for the detik story they do have some free will, it's sort of like how anda can't mae characters in a video game do certain things, but a lebih advanced version. Thanks for all the suggestions
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summer448 said:
Female:
Charity
Whitney
Melanie
Valerie
Hailee
Marina
Amy
Wendy
Gracey
Snow
Lydia
Juniper
Macy
Avery
Ashe

Male:
Parker
Travis
Kyler
Carter
Ace
Evan
Damon
David
Hunter
Cody
Lance
Luke
Mason
Owen
Nate
Mack
Ben
Vince
Sawyer
Darren
Adam
Nathan

Last names:
Hopkins
Hughes
Howard
Smith
Peterson
Greenfield
Packer
Rayford
Perry
Belton
Morris
Laverne
Wade
Walker
Norman

Here is a site I found o: link
I got most of the last names from here. It's just a big daftar of names, anda can even separate the daftar between boy and girl names.

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Thanks :)
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Np! Good luck with your story!
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