Does this look fine?

That's awesome!!!♥

I put my face up to the clear glass object, inhaling and exhaling leaving my hands oleh my sides. "No," I whispered,"this can't be," I repeated. I had lost hope, my insides turning inside out. I will not let it end here, I will not allow this to turn to dust. I slowly put my fingers to the knob, slowly opening the door and feeling the burst of air hit my face."I will not let this happen," I have diberikan up all means of life, it was impossible. What had happens happened. I was not the supreme ruler, there was nothing I could not rule over, I looked inside of the object and put my hand through the darkness and felt something hard yet soft. I pulled it out, and muttered one word before I fell into oblivion,"egg."

Not bad :)