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Okuni said:
As someone who's trying to become a komik jepang artist and pretty much waste my life on drawing practice, here's my saran to you. I have to warn anda though, I always give saran that may seem harsh, but it could help anda a lot. If anda aren't willing to read the saran however, I can truthfully tell anda that anda don't want to improve yourself. Hopefully that isn't the case. So prepare yourself.
Your picture is good for computer work, honestly I can't really draw on the com without my tablet, but anda are lacking in accuracy and detail. Sure, if it was in a rush, it's understandable if details were minimized, but at the very least, anda have to make your character in your drawing look a little lebih like the real thing. The head shape does not go well with the body and neck ratio. It's a girl right, then anda should make the chin lebih obvious and slightly pointed for that girls' look. The eyes are a bit too far up into her forehead, and it seems unnatural. The nose and mouth are fine though. Do anda understand the concepts of drafting? If anda do, please try it on paper to get the human shape right first, then when anda get that right, pinpoint where the facial features should be and draw them into your draft, then add clothes and details after. For the face, anda may want to look into a mirror to see where your own facial features are placed on your face, and that would help determine your drawing's face. Freckles should not be too obvious since they are mostly only lightly sprinkled on someone's face in real life. Take note of the average figure of both females and males for your draft oleh the way.
For clothes and hair, just draw them along your character's figure, adding some creases here and there for effect. anda can do shading right? It would look strange if anda did shading without the creases, so please don't forget them. Hair should look smooth and not too flat on the puncak, atas of the head. Add line details for effect, and also add in highlights if anda know how.
After membaca this, there is only one thing left. Practice. And practice and practice. Take things slow. Drawing is something that cannot be improved quickly. If anda try drawing one atau two pictures each day, atau at least once every three atau four days, anda should get the hang of it. And try drawing things other than humans. Inanimate objects atau other living creatures, they're all good. Scenery is good too. Drawing these will help anda get used to drawing harder stuff. Good luck. Hope anda do well and I hope this long-winded answer will prove useful to you! ^^
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