Okay, this chapter was already done but it was full of grammar errors, so I post this one with a better grammar. Of course, it’s still full of mistakes but believe me, it’s better than the first one. ;D
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It was a beautiful sunny the Central Park Zoo the binatang do everything as always... which doesn't mean it was normal. The lemurs were dancing of course to the loud music. The Four penguins were training outside their HQ. Suddenly in front of them jumped an otter.
"Hey guys, I have the great news!" the berang-berang said.
"What kind of news, Marlene?" Skipper asked.
"I'll have..." Marlene paused for a moment to build a tension "A roommate!" She looked at the penguins' faces, they weren't excited like Marlene "Hey, what?"
"This zoo will get a new member" Kowalski said.
"Ok, so what's wrong?" Marlene asked.
"We must be sure that your new roommate isn't a spy" Skipper said.
"Oh, Come on guys, anda always think of each new member of the zoo as a spy. It's..."
"This is for safety" Kowalski said.
"But maybe we'll go and welcome the new member of family. All binatang in this zoo are like a family" Private suggested.
"Private is right" Marlene agreed.
"Ok, but we'll check your roommate" berkata Skipper and they started training again.
"Bye" Marlene berkata and went back to her habitat "They are foolish, why my new roommate might be a spy?" She sat down outside her cave and waited for Alice, who had to bring the box witch her roommate.
At the afternoon, Alice finally came and left a box in Marlene's habitat. Marlene approached the box. A cover opened and a female pinguin, penguin jumped out of the box. She was really pretty. She had the golden-brown hair pulled back into a high ponytail with a black bow. She had golden eyes. Marlene her gave a hand in greeting.
"Hi, I'm Marlene, your roommate"
"Hi, Nice to meet anda Marlene" the pinguin, penguin berkata cordially "I'm Katherine"
"So. do anda want to visit our zoo?" Marlene asked.
"Sure, thank anda Marlene"
Marlene and Katherine walked through the zoo. Marlene showed Katherine animals' habitats. She tried to skip the lemurs' habitat but unfortunately...
"Hello, Marlene and... a beautiful pinguin, penguin lady" Julien berkata andjumped out of the habitat landing in front of them.
"Julien, don't disturb me, please" Marlene said.
"Disturb? If someone disturbs someone it's you, the king never disturb because the king is your king!"
"Um, the king?" Katherine asked.
"Yes, I'm the king and if anda want to visit my royal habitat..." Julien berkata putting his hand on Katherine's shoulder. Marlene grabbed him.
"If anda don't want to lose anda perfect royal nose, I'll recommend anda to leave us, now" she said.
"Okay, don't touch my nose!" Julien berkata and jumped on a dinding of his habitat.
"Feet!" Mort berkata and ran to him.
"Don't touch the royal feet!" Julien berkata and kicked him away.
"Um..." Katherine said.
"Yes... um, you'll get used to this. Just rememberto not touch his feet" Marlene said.
"Believe me, I'm not going to" Katherine berkata and they laughed.
"Now, you're part of our family" Marlene berkata "But ignore the penguins' behavior, they're... different"
"Oh, some penguins are here?" Katherine asked different voice.
"Yes, why are anda asking?" Marlene replied, surprised of Katherine's voice.
"Nothing" Katherine berkata and they walked to a selanjutnya habitat. Suddenly the four penguins appear on the way.
"So, how is your new..." Skipper paused, looking at Katherine, who was looking at him too.
"Katherine?" Skipper asked looking at Katherine as if he saw a ghost.
"Skipper?" Katherine asked.
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It was a beautiful sunny the Central Park Zoo the binatang do everything as always... which doesn't mean it was normal. The lemurs were dancing of course to the loud music. The Four penguins were training outside their HQ. Suddenly in front of them jumped an otter.
"Hey guys, I have the great news!" the berang-berang said.
"What kind of news, Marlene?" Skipper asked.
"I'll have..." Marlene paused for a moment to build a tension "A roommate!" She looked at the penguins' faces, they weren't excited like Marlene "Hey, what?"
"This zoo will get a new member" Kowalski said.
"Ok, so what's wrong?" Marlene asked.
"We must be sure that your new roommate isn't a spy" Skipper said.
"Oh, Come on guys, anda always think of each new member of the zoo as a spy. It's..."
"This is for safety" Kowalski said.
"But maybe we'll go and welcome the new member of family. All binatang in this zoo are like a family" Private suggested.
"Private is right" Marlene agreed.
"Ok, but we'll check your roommate" berkata Skipper and they started training again.
"Bye" Marlene berkata and went back to her habitat "They are foolish, why my new roommate might be a spy?" She sat down outside her cave and waited for Alice, who had to bring the box witch her roommate.
At the afternoon, Alice finally came and left a box in Marlene's habitat. Marlene approached the box. A cover opened and a female pinguin, penguin jumped out of the box. She was really pretty. She had the golden-brown hair pulled back into a high ponytail with a black bow. She had golden eyes. Marlene her gave a hand in greeting.
"Hi, I'm Marlene, your roommate"
"Hi, Nice to meet anda Marlene" the pinguin, penguin berkata cordially "I'm Katherine"
"So. do anda want to visit our zoo?" Marlene asked.
"Sure, thank anda Marlene"
Marlene and Katherine walked through the zoo. Marlene showed Katherine animals' habitats. She tried to skip the lemurs' habitat but unfortunately...
"Hello, Marlene and... a beautiful pinguin, penguin lady" Julien berkata andjumped out of the habitat landing in front of them.
"Julien, don't disturb me, please" Marlene said.
"Disturb? If someone disturbs someone it's you, the king never disturb because the king is your king!"
"Um, the king?" Katherine asked.
"Yes, I'm the king and if anda want to visit my royal habitat..." Julien berkata putting his hand on Katherine's shoulder. Marlene grabbed him.
"If anda don't want to lose anda perfect royal nose, I'll recommend anda to leave us, now" she said.
"Okay, don't touch my nose!" Julien berkata and jumped on a dinding of his habitat.
"Feet!" Mort berkata and ran to him.
"Don't touch the royal feet!" Julien berkata and kicked him away.
"Um..." Katherine said.
"Yes... um, you'll get used to this. Just rememberto not touch his feet" Marlene said.
"Believe me, I'm not going to" Katherine berkata and they laughed.
"Now, you're part of our family" Marlene berkata "But ignore the penguins' behavior, they're... different"
"Oh, some penguins are here?" Katherine asked different voice.
"Yes, why are anda asking?" Marlene replied, surprised of Katherine's voice.
"Nothing" Katherine berkata and they walked to a selanjutnya habitat. Suddenly the four penguins appear on the way.
"So, how is your new..." Skipper paused, looking at Katherine, who was looking at him too.
"Katherine?" Skipper asked looking at Katherine as if he saw a ghost.
"Skipper?" Katherine asked.