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Chapter 1: Sinners Like Me
anda see; Edward Elric was the half steel spawn of a genius alchemist and an innocent woman. As clever and genius as he likes to tell his 15 tahun old self, Edward had always been into trouble his whole life. So when he attempted to bring his mother back to life and he lost his limbs; and his brother his body, Edward was shipped off to a town called Ravelstok. Ravelstok was a town where invalids were put, where the world wouldn't have to deal with them. It was a bit less modernized than the other cities surrounding it, but it had a small port inland. Edward was put into a small tenant house portioned off the side of a large building. A stronghold. It was a church. The pastor had the sinner brought to him to restore the word of "God" to him. And what really broke Edward was that Alphonse was taken to a Psychiatric asylum; after his soul was bound to the armor. Edward isn't allowed to visit him. But his world came crashing down when he was told that alchemy was a sin in Ravelstok. Being clever as he always was, Edward had found a loophole in the system. He had found a broken down and deserted mini town near the corner of the port in the middle of a woods thicket where he would practice. He called this place "Silent Hollow". Edward took frequent trips to visit inside the Alloway Hospital; visiting with the sick. He occasionally would help heal wounds with alchemy and innocently stroll out.
The now 18 1/2 year-old Edward Elric; dressed in his black wife beater and leather pants and boots-straw hair tied up in a braid- was grazing through the topiary of the Church. A small book with a leather bible binding, but the pages were those of an alchemy book. The church bells chimed loudly. It was noon already. He would be late for his class inside the Church, but he didn't care. He had other things to do. Like...alright well he didn't. He just despised the Church and their illogical thinking. As he was in deep thought, a boy his age ran past him and bumped his shoulder hard. His book fell from this right hand. He bent down to pick it up and cussed harshly under his breath. As he stood back up, the boy who had almost ran him into the ground.
"C'mon Edward! Pastor has news for us! anda must hurry!"
Edward's nose twitched.
"How about anda watch where you're going, punk."
He sneered and walked into the towering building.
"Good morning my children."
A tall bald man stood at a podium in the center of the Sanctuary. Large stained glass windows lined the walls of the large room.
"Morning, Pastor Marshall."
The other sinners answered. They had been transformed and manipulated into thinking the mentality of Christian ways. Edward sat in the back of the Sanctuary in the last pew.
"Children of God, knowledge from the Lord has been bestowed upon me."
Edward continued to read his "Bible" as the preacher babbled on.
"A man in this very town has committed a deadly sin. He has been experimenting with alchemy."
Edward was listening now. He peered up from the puncak, atas of his book.
"He has created chimeras."
Edward now had his book closed and slipped away into his pants pocket.
"All have passed on, but markings from him have mysteriously appeared on the town and have been recognize as alchemical symbols. We don't know the culprit quite yet. So I ask anda all, please don't leave your tenants for a while."
He had heard enough of this nonsense about how alchemy was a sin.
"You know, Pastor?"
The children looked back at him.
"Did anda ever think that alchemy isn't as bad as they all say?"
His voice had raised considerably and he was standing up oleh now.
"Or is your half-ass faith to your half-ass God all anda think about anda thick-skulked bastard!?"
Edward had the whole Sanctuary gazing at his back with gasps as he kicked open the Church doors and stormed outside.
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Chapter 1: Sinners Like Me
anda see; Edward Elric was the half steel spawn of a genius alchemist and an innocent woman. As clever and genius as he likes to tell his 15 tahun old self, Edward had always been into trouble his whole life. So when he attempted to bring his mother back to life and he lost his limbs; and his brother his body, Edward was shipped off to a town called Ravelstok. Ravelstok was a town where invalids were put, where the world wouldn't have to deal with them. It was a bit less modernized than the other cities surrounding it, but it had a small port inland. Edward was put into a small tenant house portioned off the side of a large building. A stronghold. It was a church. The pastor had the sinner brought to him to restore the word of "God" to him. And what really broke Edward was that Alphonse was taken to a Psychiatric asylum; after his soul was bound to the armor. Edward isn't allowed to visit him. But his world came crashing down when he was told that alchemy was a sin in Ravelstok. Being clever as he always was, Edward had found a loophole in the system. He had found a broken down and deserted mini town near the corner of the port in the middle of a woods thicket where he would practice. He called this place "Silent Hollow". Edward took frequent trips to visit inside the Alloway Hospital; visiting with the sick. He occasionally would help heal wounds with alchemy and innocently stroll out.
The now 18 1/2 year-old Edward Elric; dressed in his black wife beater and leather pants and boots-straw hair tied up in a braid- was grazing through the topiary of the Church. A small book with a leather bible binding, but the pages were those of an alchemy book. The church bells chimed loudly. It was noon already. He would be late for his class inside the Church, but he didn't care. He had other things to do. Like...alright well he didn't. He just despised the Church and their illogical thinking. As he was in deep thought, a boy his age ran past him and bumped his shoulder hard. His book fell from this right hand. He bent down to pick it up and cussed harshly under his breath. As he stood back up, the boy who had almost ran him into the ground.
"C'mon Edward! Pastor has news for us! anda must hurry!"
Edward's nose twitched.
"How about anda watch where you're going, punk."
He sneered and walked into the towering building.
"Good morning my children."
A tall bald man stood at a podium in the center of the Sanctuary. Large stained glass windows lined the walls of the large room.
"Morning, Pastor Marshall."
The other sinners answered. They had been transformed and manipulated into thinking the mentality of Christian ways. Edward sat in the back of the Sanctuary in the last pew.
"Children of God, knowledge from the Lord has been bestowed upon me."
Edward continued to read his "Bible" as the preacher babbled on.
"A man in this very town has committed a deadly sin. He has been experimenting with alchemy."
Edward was listening now. He peered up from the puncak, atas of his book.
"He has created chimeras."
Edward now had his book closed and slipped away into his pants pocket.
"All have passed on, but markings from him have mysteriously appeared on the town and have been recognize as alchemical symbols. We don't know the culprit quite yet. So I ask anda all, please don't leave your tenants for a while."
He had heard enough of this nonsense about how alchemy was a sin.
"You know, Pastor?"
The children looked back at him.
"Did anda ever think that alchemy isn't as bad as they all say?"
His voice had raised considerably and he was standing up oleh now.
"Or is your half-ass faith to your half-ass God all anda think about anda thick-skulked bastard!?"
Edward had the whole Sanctuary gazing at his back with gasps as he kicked open the Church doors and stormed outside.
I hope anda all liked it so far. komentar please! Thanks!