Dean opened the door of Cas and Meg’s house and whistled when he entered the fancy hallway. “Wow” he said. “You sure anda don’t need an extra room mate to fill in the space?”
“We have plenty bedrooms” Cas replied. Dean turned around and raised his eyebrows. “I was joking”
“Oh” Cas berkata soft, looking away. He felt something soft in his back and stepped aside; Sam was passing through with his luggage.
“Where can I drop these?” he asked, lifting the bags.
“Here” Cas answered. He tried to scratch his neck again, but Dean grabbed his hand. “Aaahh!” Cas exclaimed...

Isabel braced herself before she opened the door to the police station. She hadn’t been here since the slaughtering a few weeks ago. Her superior had sent her on a vacation.
“Isabel, what are anda doing here?” a man asked, as he looked up from his desk.
“Hi, Victor” Isabel greeted the man and she smiled weak. “I’m just…picking up a few things I forgot. Personal stuff” she explained as she walked to her office.
“Why didn’t anda give us a call. We would’ve sent someone” Victor commented.
“I wanted to save anda the trouble” Isabel shrugged and she entered her office....

Hullo my lovelies. My name is alexischaos2004 atau Alexis. Today, I am going to review a fanfiction based off of Naruto, and it is pretty bad. I got the bits from the fanfic from another review on it. So, let's go!


"ARE anda &&& KIDDING ME? I can't believe we && &$& $& &&&)(&# &$#&T&S two trips to the dentist!"

First, who says actual text symbols in a sentence? Nobody could actually say them. Next, please work on your grammar. I'm not really sure the world of naruto even has dentists. (It was written like this on the other review on this...

Elena was too ashamed to leave her room and she didn’t open when someone knocked. And thus Caroline invited herself in. She found her best friend sitting in a corner, her arms thrown around her knees.
“Ah, poor thing” Caroline sighed compassionate as she walked to Elena, a box in her arms. “Damon told me what happened. anda okay?”
Elena shrugged and wiped her tears. “He’s says this is normal. How would he know? He’s a dude, isn’t he?”
“But he’s right” Caroline berkata and she sank down selanjutnya to her.
“My stomach hurts” Elena sobbed. Caroline searched through her box and...

Elena’s POV
    The night got colder as I walked further away from the Founder’s hari party. Just a few lebih steps and I’ll be at the school.
    I reached the school’s front door but when I tried to open them but they wouldn’t budge. I gave up and sighed. I crossed my arm’s trying to keep warm. Looking around trying to find another way in, though the only way I knew of was the doors in the back of the school.
    I slowly walked my self to the back doors. I grabbed the frost bitten door handle and pulled it open. Once I walked...

"Alright than." Silver nodded slowly, turning back to face down at his notebook and pencil. Shadow panted, looking up at the clock on the wall. It was 2:59, and they would leave class at 3:00. "One lebih minute...." Shadow mumbled to himself, his eyes still locked onto the clock, panting. Now, it turned 3:00, and Shadow immediately got up out of his kursi and skated off. Silver watched his whole class leave, and he followed. He pushed his chair under his desk, and took his notebook and pencil with him as he hovered down the hallway. Shadow looked behind him, and teleported to his house.

"...Shadow?"...

Veronica parked her car in front of her supernatural prison. She stepped out and walked to the back of her car.
Two of her minions, guarding the entrance, came towards her to give her a hand. Veronica unlocked the bagasi, batang and the two men grabbed Jeremy’s arm.
“Lock him up” she ordered furious. They both held him tightly, though he was in no condition to fight them. “Is Rachel inside?”
One of them confirmed that and she headed to the entrance. Rachel was pacing through the room where Caroline, Stefan and Katherine were captivated.
“Can I talk to anda for a moment?” she asked dead serious....

Matt, Keith, Bonnie, Jeremy and Veronica were sitting around the dapur table. Veronica had diberikan each a cup of coffee, in order to stay awake.
“Thank you” Jeremy berkata uncomfortable. “You don’t really know Elena. It’s not like anda owe her anything”
Veronica cast him a grin that didn’t reach her eyes. “Anything for my soldiers” she replied charming.
“How’s that going?” Matt asked, trying to keep a conversation. “Do anda need anyone else in your…army?”
“Why? Interested?” Veronica returned, raising her eyebrows. “For now the training’s canceled” She turned...

“Caroline!”
Caroline was walking on the parking lot of the school. Her conversation with Matt had lasted longer than either of them had expected. She recognized Tyler’s voice, but didn’t bother to turn around. When she reached her car and opened the door Tyler rushed to her and slammed the door.
“Tyler!” Caroline exclaimed reproaching.
“I’m sorry” Tyler said. He took a deep breath. “I saw anda talking to Matt” he started.
Caroline quickly turned around. “Oh no. No, no, no, no. anda do not get to play jealous boyfriend. anda had your shot, anda blew it. Now anda can go back to...

Damon and Elena were lying on the hospital bed. Damon was holding Elena in his arms and they were staring at the ceiling.
“I really hope Stefan can talk him out of it” Elena berkata soft and sad.
“You can always, anda know, compel him” Damon said. “I mean, let me atau Stefan do it”
Elena lifted her head and looked at Damon as if she strongly considered it, but then shook her head. “No” she berkata and she lay back down. “I’m tired, Damon” she whispered.
Damon gave her a soft ciuman on her upper lip. “Then sleep, princess, I’ll be here watching over you” He looked up at the window....

Tyler parked his car on the parking lot of the Mystic Grill. He saw Caroline leaning against the dinding outside drinking some Bourbon. He hoped she wouldn’t look up. But as he made his way to the entrance she looked up.
“Tyler?” she berkata surprised.
Just keep walking, Tyler thought.
“I know anda can hear me, Tyler” Caroline berkata uncomprehending. “Why are anda avoiding me?”
Tyler stopped and walked towards Caroline. “Caroline, hi” he forced himself to say. He scratch his hair, feeling uncomfortable. “Don’t you…don’t anda have school to go to?”
“Lunch break” Caroline explained....

Damon and Derek entered the Boarding House. Damon took Derek’s arm and raced to the basement. He walked to the freezer and opened it.
“Wow! anda have quite a supply here” Derek berkata admirable.
“Help yourself” Damon berkata and Derek took a bag of blood. Then they heard a bang.
“What’s that?” Derek asked agitated.
“I have no idea” Damon berkata frowning. He looked at Derek. “You stay here”
Derek nodded fiercely and Damon ran towards the noise. “Elena?!” he shouted.
“I’m in here!” Elena replied. Damon entered his bedroom. Elena was sitting on the ground surrounded oleh wooden...

Caroline and Tyler dropped on the ground. They looked up and discovered they were outside. A red glow enlightened the scene and the sun was slowly rising.
“Good thing Bonnie gave him back his ring” Tyler said.
“Can anda please not say that name?” Caroline asked. “I don’t want to think about what she got me involved into, let alone hear her name, especially not from you”
Tyler took her hand and nipped it softly. “I’m sorry’
“ ‘s Okay” Caroline said, treating him with a little smile.
“Ehm, shouldn’t they have come out oleh now?” Tyler asked looking at Bonnies house.
Inside,...

Stefan grabbed Elena oleh her hair and dragged her back into the house, his ripper face still on.
“Stefan, let go of me. You’re hurting me” Elena cried.
“Well, you’re hurting me!” Stefan growled. “We haven’t even officially broken up yet and you’re already clinging on my brother like a fetus on a navel string”
He dragged her to his bedroom and wanted to throw her inside, when he felt a sudden aching in his back. He looked aside and saw Katherine. He brought his arm back until he found the stake.
“Okay, first of all, ouch!” Stefan berkata and he pulled out the stake. “Second...

The Salvatore Boarding House
Stefan and Katherine were back home. Stefan had told Jeremy everything that had happened on Elena’s birthday and only after making sure Jeremy wouldn’t do anything stupid he had left.
“You must be hungry” Katherine berkata and before Stefan could komentar she went off to the basement. She came back with two bags of blood and walked to the cupboard, where she pulled out two wine-glasses. She poured the blood in the glasses as if it were wine. She gave one to Stefan and lifted hers to toast. “Cheers” she berkata and she hooked her arm in Stefan’s. She pulled...

A cold wind teased Kelsey’s naked body and she shivered. She slowly opened her eyes and looked around. There was nothing but leaves. Kelsey searched the ground with her hands and they touched something cold and solid. She slowly and fearful rotated her head. When she saw her sister’s body she gasped and covered her mouth. “Oh my God” she started crying as she crawled to Amber. “Amber, wake up. Please, honey, wake up” But Ambers eyes remained closed. “I’m so sorry, Amber. This is all my fault” she sobbed.
“Hey, anda didn’t do all of it. I kicked some pantat, keledai too”
Kelsey looked...

Klaus was standing in the center of the parking lot, staring in the distance, waiting for his spy to come back with the doppelganger. He had no intention in killing her rightaway. Not if there was a chance both Salvatores would come to her rescue and could witness her death. That would be beyond his imagination.
He heard some struggling and understood they were back.
“Excellent timing” he slowly berkata when Amber dropped Elena before his feet. “Please, be a little careful with our special guest”
Amber shrugged. “She’s just a human. She doesn’t matter”
“You were human, not so long...

Damon and Elena were in the kitchen, while Jeremy was playing some videogame and Alaric was out.
“Okay, what kind of flavor do anda want? We have chocolate, vanilla, strawberry. Make your pick” Damon said, when he showed the three boxes of puding powder. He was making dessert for after dinner.
“Ehm… strawberry” Elena said. She moved on her chair and felt something pushing against her leg. She stuck her hand in her pocket and took out her cell phone. She suspiciously looked at it. “What’s this?” she asked carefully. Damon turned his head and looked at the black, rectangle that...

“I still can’t believe anda killed him”
Amber and Kelsey were hiding in the woods.
“And I can’t believe anda just drained him” Kelsey fired back. Amber shrugged. “You know what I am, what did anda expect?”
“Who turned you?” Kelsey asked.
“Some guy named Stefan, why?” Amber said. Kelsey’s eyes widened. “Stefan Salvatore?” “Yeah” “You got involved with a Salvatore? Are anda out of your mind?”
“I didn’t get involved with him! He got involved with me. He attacked me. And why are anda so upset about him being a Salvatore?” Amber asked uncomprehending.
“The...

Mrs. Jones was cleaning the breakfast meja when someone rang the bell. She put the dishes on the dresser and walked to the front door. She opened and froze.
“You” she berkata weak when seeing Cas.
“Hello, Mrs. Jones” Cas berkata friendly. “Can I come in, please?”
“I…I don’t know, Mr…” Mrs. Jones stammered reluctant.
“Novak. Castiel Novak” Cas introduced himself. He nodded at Meg. “This is Meg Masters. She’s a close friend. Please, Mrs. Jones, I just want to talk to you”
Mrs. Jones sighed. “Fine, then” she berkata and she let them in. She led them to the dapur where...