2x08- Empty Planet

Okay so I wrote a fanfic and i was wondering if anyone wanted to read it... here's the first chapter and here's the link
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Chapter One

Fallon Sawyer stood in line at the starbucks every morning before heading off on a acak adventure; she never deviated from her routine as she was a very precise woman. She ordered her usual, and today for a treat bought a double chunk cokelat chip cookie, for later of course. She waited patiently in line to receive her morning pick-me-up. She gazed aimlessly around the establishment. The walls...

Summary: What if Reid had gotten shot in Derailed.
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When Bryar turned his back, Reid took his opportunity to get gun. He grabbed for gun and struggled to get it from the disturbed man's hands.

When the gun was finally solely in Reid's hands, a gunshot rang out.

For a moment everyone on the train was confused, from where the shot came from since the supposed 'technician' had it in his hands and didn't have his finger on the trigger.

Reid was confused as well, but when he went to pocket the gun, he felt a strong sting of pain in his...