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Critical Analysis of Twilight Pertanyaan

I've been thinking...

I am currently an English-Creative menulis major in college, and I've been turning over an idea in my head for a while now. I want to practice on my own first 'novel.' I'm aware of copyright infringement and all that (I'm going to put a disclaimer XD), but I was thinking of rewriting Twilight. In my own way. Not as a parody, but with developed characters and a good storyline and plot. I think that Twilight had some potential in the hands of a capable author, and from what I've heard, I'm a pretty good writer.

I was going to write it as a fanfic on fanfiction.net. What do anda think? I'm still on the edge of deciding whether I'll do it atau not. If anda like atau dislike the idea say so, but just be polite please. And if anda have ideas for it FANTASTIC! :D My email address is ladyvampresslilith@yahoo.com; please send me your ideas. It could be about anything to do with Twilight to make it better.

Please tell me what anda think! Thank you!

LadyLilith (aka LadyCat aka Shelby) ♥
 LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Critical Analysis of Twilight Jawaban

Twilight_Dream said:
well, thinking that its a bad story is YOUR opinion. not fact. so please dont make it like it is. and what do anda mean in the hands of a good d author? twilight was Stephenie Meyer's idea. no one els's. otherwise it wouldn't BE twilight. and rewriting it saying that YOU'LL make it better like your some accomplished penulis makes it seem like your really full of yourself. so i would say no. im sorry if i haven't been polite but its just i got really ticked off seeing this question.
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posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu 
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I apologize that it made anda angry, I was simply asking a question. No, I am not full of myself; I am actually the exact opposite. It took many other people saying that I was a good writer to consider this, and I still don't wholly believe them. I am no accomplished author; I never berkata it once. It's a fanfic, so I can write it if I decide to do so; I will put the disclaimer on it saying that it is Stephenie Meyer's work. It would simply be an experiment of my abilities as an author. I personally think Ms. Meyer is not a good author, and I think that she could have made Twilight into a way better, lebih well written series than what it is. I am curious as to what my version would be like.
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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but how could that offend someone so much? it seems childish.
Twilight_Dream posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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can anda please take one detik to stop being rude and sarcastic?
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friendsfan101 said:
Well, I'd cinta to see a story!
Even though I'm a fan of Twilight, I don't think that SM is the best writer, now that I look back on Twilight, it kind of...sucks. (No offense, Twilight_Dream, I know anda cinta Twilight!) I think that it'd be cool to read a re-write of it. I don't think that it would be too bad, because there are a large numbers of cinderella re-writes and nothing bad's happened. I'm all for it!
Of course, you'd have to write that anda don't own Twilight if anda put it up online, and I'm guessing that anda would have to tweak some of the names and some aspects of the plot if anda ever publikasi it, but I'd cinta to read a story! I hope anda write it, and please, tell me when anda do! I'd enjoy membaca it. =)
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posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu 
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^-^ Thank anda for your support! I'm thinking I may; once I've written some of it, I will post up a link. :)
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Cool! I can't wait to read it. =)
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Queenoftard said:
Personally, I think it's a brilliant idea. I've been toying with the idea myself.
I don't really have any specific ideas yet, as I'm pretty occupied with other projects, but I would cinta to read your version.
Will anda tell me if anda do decide to write it? atau maybe anda could just give me your username on fanfiction.net?
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My username on fanfiction.net is AikaOokami, and I might post a link to the first chapter up on the spot as well, if Dearheart doesn't see an issue with it. If anda come up with any ideas for character atau story development, please email me atau message me and let me know and we can discuss it. People have berkata that I'm a decent writer, but any help I can get is much appreciated. :)
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
Dearheart said:
It's very true and very tragic...Twilight had a LOT of potential, but it was squelched and turned into a teeny-bopper drool fest. In the right hands, it could've turned out to be a genuinely great series.

If anda want to rewrite Twilight "LadyCat style", then oleh all means, go ahead. As long as anda don't try to publikasi atau sell it, I don't think you'll run into any trouble. And I think it could be a fun and interesting way for anda to exercise your menulis skills. However, I think it only fair to warn that link has already been done. So make sure your version stands out from the others people have done.

And hey, if anda get creative enough with the plot and the characters, maybe anda could change their names and publikasi it as an original work someday! ^__^
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posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu 
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Ah ha, LadyCat style. I like that. :) Thank you. As I said, if anda got any ideas for character changes/flaws atau ideas for the storyline, please contact me and discuss it with me. Any help I can get I will gladly take. :)
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
mandapanda said:
Hmm. I'm actually very interested in membaca your version. I know Stephenie Meyer has some *cough*many*cough* grammatical errors in the books, however, maybe it was because of her lack of menulis experience? We can't really be sure. I've heard The Host is pretty well written. lol sorry. I'm getting off topic :)

As anda know, I'm a huge Twilight fan, and I'm very curious as to how anda will write your Twilight story. Will anda be changing the main storyline? And will anda add lebih time and developement to characters anda feel had been cheated? And will anda be menulis New Moon and the other buku if your story does well? Mainly, I really want Breaking Dawn to be REDONE! lol I've found some rewrites, but not the way I wanted it haha

I cinta Twilight because it is personal. Dearheart had berkata above that making your character a blank is not something anda want as an author... however, I cinta that. There are alot of stories that have characters who are relatable and have relatable traits, but being able to become the character and how the story is told through the vessel (Bella), it further engulfs anda and encaptures you. It's one thing to be captured and completely wrapped up in a book, but it's a whole different feeling when anda feel like anda are the character and anda are in the story... My apologies if I sounded really corny there. lol

And, I will be honest. Some of the points that anda had berkata in your introduction irked me a little, just because I think Twilight has a good storyline and plot, but I KNOW that it wasn't your intentions :) Anyways, yes! I'm interested in membaca what anda would have liked Twilight to be :) Hopefully anda don't get chopped for this question. I already see some opposing and defensive answers. But I cinta anda and anda have my support :)
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posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu 
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X3 I cinta anda too, mandapanda! Thank anda so much for your support. Ha, Breaking Dawn sounds like a great challenge. If I do well with Twilight, I would cinta to rewrite Breaking Dawn. I'm sorry that what I berkata offended you, just my opinion as an English major. :) I definitely want to refine and develop the characters. The debat in my mind is what should stay and what should go as far as the story of whole goes. I want it to remain true to the original storyline, but there are some things I would like to alter as well. Anyways, thank anda so much again. If anda have any ideas at all about changes in the storyline atau in the characters, please let me know. :)
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Oh and about Stephenie Meyer, I think that she may be a good author. All I have read of hers is the Twilight series, and in my opinion she rushed through it and got it published without properly going back on it and editing it to improve her basic ideals. I believe that all writers should do that before presenting a finalized piece of work, and I just don't think she did.
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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No need to apologize! Opinions are great! lol and yes. Breaking Dawn will be a hefty challenge! haha I will input on Breaking Dawn if anda decide to re-write it! haha I have been told a few times that I have a future as a writer (LOL, i don't think so), and I was thinking about menulis Breaking Dawn the way I wanted it, but I think it'd be too much! And I would constantly ubah my work. Haha I always do that! But good luck with your story! I look meneruskan, ke depan to seeing how it differs from the original!
mandapanda posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
this-is-my-name said:
Sounds like an interesting idea... I'd cinta to read your version if anda decide to write it.

Just please, for the cinta of god, fix Bella!
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posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu 
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Oh, that's DEFINITELY happening.
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
violetbabe said:
Yes! anda should definitely do it. I know that if a capable penulis rewrote Twilight, it would be excellent. :)
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Yes, I believe so too. :) Not saying I'm that author, but I'd like to see what I can do with it.
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
snoznoodle said:
It is a great idea! I used to like the book and if it wasn't for this spot and the twi-hards I probably still would. If it was written oleh someone who knows what they're doing I think it would solve my issues with it :)

Get to work! :D
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XD Yes ma'am! *Salute* And I'm touched that anda have so much faith in me! I'll try not to let anda down!
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
MadamOcta13 said:
I think that's an amazing idea! I would so read it if someone else redid it! I'd cinta a good vampire cinta story (not a bad Meyerpire lust story)! anda should make Bella have so much lebih depth and personality...I'm actually thinking about this now...I'm tempted to do the same (but I probably won't).
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Well any ideas anda got, anda can throw at me. :) I might make a forum on here where people can give me ideas and we can all discuss it together. Bella is definitely something I plan on working on.
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
hpfreak14 said:
anda rewriting it reminds me of something that happened today.

In english my teacher berkata "I have to read Twilight for my descriptive menulis class. (yes teachers go to school to learn how to teach)The first few pages were descriptive. If it was written with less pages oleh a better penulis i think i would enjoy it more"

basically every twilight fan was really annoyed. Not many students in my class like him now but others adore and respect him.

The thought of anda rewriting it brought that up in my mind.

I would read it also if anda did
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posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu 
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Well I'm glad the whole world's not going to hell. No offense intended towards Twilight atau Stephenie Meyer. XD Thank you!
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
sleazy_weasley said:
@Twilight_Dream: anda were incredibly rude to Lady Lilith; she diposting a perfectly good question, and anda just accused her of being up herself, which she was not. She was merely stating her opinion on Twilight, and how she would like to recreate it.

In my own opinion, I think it is a brilliant idea! It would be interesting to read Twilight in a well-written form with developed characters - seeing as Meyer failed to do so.

Can't wait to read it on Fanfiction! :D Good luck! xox

P.S. When anda finish it, send us all a link!
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X3 Thank anda very much, sleazy_weasley. I will definitely let anda know when the first chapter's out.
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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see, this is what happens any time i try to post MY opinion. i get jumped on like a pack of dogs.
Twilight_Dream posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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i didnt mean it literally. and anda know that.
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italiangirl976 said:
I think it is a bad idea. It was Stephenie Meyer's idea. Not yours.
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Understandable.
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
bookworm12345 said:
Twilght hAs no potinetial I wouldn't bother trying make ur own I'd rather read ur orignial ideas
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Hmmm, I don't agree with the first part (even as anti Twilight as I am). But I'm pleased that you're interested in my other works. :) I have diposting a lot of poetry on my deviantart account in the link here if anda would like to read it: link
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
rachaelwsz said:
I'm actually kinda curious how your version will turn out... so I say: Do it. =)



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posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu 
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Oh and I forgot to mention... Breaking Dawn! I think that's a challenge... So a rewrite should be interesting... =)
rachaelwsz posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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Ohhh yeah. *Cracks knuckles* Breaking Dawn should be something. lol
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
MrazBell10 said:
Well....I think... it's a good idea...
I want to see how it turns out...
I'm a little offended because...you see...I'm a Twilight fanatic...and...I read the Twilight Saga over and over again...
but I want to see it with other's point of view...
As a bookworm...
PLEASE!!! IF anda FINISH THE WHOLE TWILIGHT SAGA PLS. E-MAIL IT AT MY ACCOUNT IN YAHOO: mraz_bell10@yahoo.com

Thanks...
♥ ya'...

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Hey, anda know what? It's perfectly understandable that you're a bit offended, and that's just fine. I think it's really, really great that you're a Twilight fanatic, but that you're civil to the people who don't like it. That's lebih than I can say for other Twi-fans I've run into. So keep it up! You're awesome! (Bookworms FTW!) =)
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katiecain said:
DO IT AND DON'T MURDER JACOB'S CHARACTER LIKE STEPHENIE DID, LADYCAT. KTHX? :) ♥
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XDDD That's one of the things that will change. As GrintCat berkata somewhere else...he won't be humping Renesmee's leg oleh the end of it. atau something like that, it was funny. XD
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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ya atleast make him imprint on a human please.i am begging u
14jcub posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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'he won't be humping Renesmee's leg oleh the end of it' HA HA HA HA HA.
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Matsy23 said:
cool!!!!! thats a pretty good idea!!!!! ^^
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Book_freak said:
It could work, just try to do it better than the origonal. Not that it could be worse :P lol
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snusnu13 said:
OMG when are anda going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws!

I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool.

I think it would be way awesome and please leave a komentar on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net.

And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it.

JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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 OMG when are anda going to write it? it sounds fantastic. I was considering re-writing it for my enjoyment. I would like to see Bella with some convincing flaws and Edward with some flaws, any flaws! I think it wouldn't be that difficult to re-write the bad book series, maybe do a alternate version where it is scientifically correct so Renesmee cant possibly exist, that would be cool. I think it would be way awesome and please leave a komentar on my response when it's up on fanfiction.net. And for all people who think S.Meyer is a great writer, please reconsider because personally, I think she should recieve some critism and not be so uptight about it. JK Rowling and HP 4 Eva!
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XDDDD Omg. I'm majoring in English, so 'unpossible' cracked me up. I feel like such a dork lol. But yes, I will certainly let anda know. ^-^
LadyLilith posted lebih dari setahun yang lalu
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thanks, i really hope anda do it
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