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fdarcy said:
Thank you, this was lovely, I enjoyed reading this from Gwen's perspective and she is funny, can't wait for the next chapter. Is this a reincarnation story?, I know you won't tell but I still had to ask.
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It is not a reincarnation story.
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fdarcy said:
Thank you.
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If it's not a detail that is pertinent to the story, I will tell. :)

And chapter 2 is up.
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You know, I was thinking lately how come you haven't posted anything yet. I (almost) started jumping up and down when I saw this ^^

Ch1: I don't remember last time I giggled so much while reading .. It was so sweet and (almost) unrealistic, but it's them so it felt right. The transition from "he's crazy" to "yes", just talking, it was perfect. I must admit, in some RL I cannot imagine this happening, because I am more like Gwen's last sentence "he stabs me in my sleep"..

Ch2: Arthur, always so sweet and charming. I adore them when they get jelous. Adorable! And even though they got married in an instant, I love how they are taking time with everything else. Somehow, makes it more special.

This is definitely a special story, Kim. I really like how you made it a mix of a "regular" story and Gwen's POV. very interesting!
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fdarcy said:
Just read chapter 2, I am curious does Gwen owns the bakery? Loved their little jealousy, enjoyed Gwaine, I can't wait for Uther's reaction.
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Joppa, I was doing a Sleepy Hollow thing after I finished Two Hearts. I don't actively work on/post more than one story at a time anymore. My old brain can't take it. :)

You'll find out more about Gwen's job in chapter four.
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Haha, you'd think your brain would be more trained by now. But I totally get. ^^
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Getting old.
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Chapter 3 is up!
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fdarcy said:
Loved chapter 3, the mention of Vivian make me cringe a little. Still waiting for Uther's reaction to his sons marriage and his meeting with Gwen. Thanks again for another lovely story.
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arwentko1 said:
Thank you Kim! Another Arwen Story. I'm happy.
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Gwen's rambling is the best! It's amazing how much they understand each other in such a short time. Also, i like how there still are sometimes awkward situations. Makes it much more realistic. And Tito's adorable!
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How I got the name Tito

Husband: What's the neighbors' dog's name? Tito?
Me: Cricket.
Husband: Oh.
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Well, name Tito has a whole different meaning in my country. Not for me though, too young and all.
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What does it mean in your country?

Generally, it's a Latino first name or nickname. The Michael, Tito, Jermaine, Jackie, Marlon, and Michael mentioned in the story are referring to the Jackson 5, in case anyone doesn't know. Of course, they aren't Latino, but one of them was called Tito (his real name is Tariano).
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Here you go link ...
I've never heard of Jackson 5. But then of course, my music range is very limited to punk and rock.
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Ah, okay.

Surely you've heard of Michael Jackson, though, right? It was him and 4 of his brothers when he was a kid. *goes off to YouTube to find videos with which to spam Joppa*
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hahah tunblr makes sense now
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Chapter 4 is up!
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I was surprised how long it took Uther to lose it. But honestly, I think that was a normal parental reaction. Okay, those social stanard comments were too much, but still it's normal for him to question their sudden decision. I know I would have freaked out in his place and I'm not even a parent.
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fdarcy said:
Loved this chapter, now please don't flay me when I say that I understand Uther's attitude in this chapter. I know that he is a pompous ass but in this chapter he was right. Any parent would have been outraged if there child did as Arthur did, they would question their child's maturity and sanity. Arthur does stand up very nicely in this chapter as does Gwen.
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Chapter 5 is up!
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Finally caught up with this. I've been reading 'The help' book and it had me completely mesmerized.
Jelous Arthur, my favorite. But who wouldn't be in his spot. They're both really adorable with the jelousy. Gwaine is charming as always. It is sk easy to imagine his and Gwen's relationship.
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Chapter 6 is up.
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fdarcy said:
Chapter 5: Loved the relationship between Gwen and Gwaine, they really are more like siblings. Thank you for making Vivian go away don't like her.
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fdarcy said:
Chapter 6: Glad that Gwen got on with Morgana and Leon along with baby Mordred. Lance too bad.
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Morgana is awesome. Just like how I would have imagine modern day good Morgana. She and Leob makime an interesting pairing, but that's what I like about it.
I always enjoy reading about Lancelot getting turned down! Arthur was really cute with his offer. I cannot wait to see Elyan's reaction.
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Chapter 7 is up!
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I love how among all her scenarios there weren't any about adultery. And Arthur understanding everything even before she said anything.. I also love how open and comfortable they are with each other.
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fdarcy said:
Gwen is in love and not ready to admit it, we know Arthur has been in love from day one and is not afraid to admit it but is holding off for fear of overwhelming her. Thanks for a very nice chapter showing their growing understanding between the two.
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Chapter 8 is up!
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fdarcy said:
Now that Arthur has admitted that he loves her not that we did not know , I wonder when Gwen will realise that she really is in love with her husband. This was a very lovely chapter.
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I really thought she was going to say it back. Arthur is wonderful with not pressuring her. Actually he's wonderful at everything.
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Chapter 9 is up!
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fdarcy said:
Oh damn, what a chapter! I hope the next chapter will be soon and in it I hope that Gwen will be the one chasing after Arthur and telling him that she loves him as we all know that she does. I know that she is a little afraid and that the loss of her parents at a young age would leave her and any child with abandonment issues and fear of loosing and disappointing her only remaining relation, this is something she needs to deal with and I think she needs to speak with someone about it and maybe Gwaine's mother since that is the closest mother figure she has. I know I should not be telling you any of this since I know that you will deal with all this in the up coming chapters.
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I saw some people reviewed that Gwen was being weak and that she should go get Arthur. However, I think this was the strongest thing she has done, finally admitted to herself that she doesn't have answers to her actions, which doesn't mean they were wrong. I just like how she was finally honest both with herself and Arthur. Only now can she realise she really loves him and get him back. Great chapter, Kim!
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fdarcy and Joppa, thank you both! You both "get it" and I love that you do!
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fdarcy said:
Lovely chapter, Gwaine is not only a very good friend but one who knows her so well and what to say but not push. Gwen is now thinking and realising that she loves Arthur and also her biggest fear is loosing someone she loves and we all know where that fear is coming form, hopefully she will start to deal with it. The good thing is that Arthur knows that she needs time to deal with what is holding her back from truly committing to their relationship," He wants to hold her and kiss her and whisper sweet words into her ears until she feels safe, confident, and happy again."
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Oh yeah, 10 is up, sorry!
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Chapter 11 is up!
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fdarcy said:
Just read it and the chapter should be entitled Gwen's Epiphany. Loved Mordred he is so cute and Morgana is a loving sister and sympathetic sister- in- law, not a nosy parker. Thanks for the update and I look forward to the next chapter.
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Two chapters! YAY!
Ch10: Oh, the inner struggle. Loved it! It was so real and so devastating. And my heart breaks for Arthur. As bad it is for her, it is for him as well, maybe even more, because he thinks she doesn't love him.
Btw, those cupcakes were brilliant!
Ch11: Their talk was so sad.. I loved how jelous she got over Sophia. And I am really happy she was wrong about Elyan, he's an awesome brother. They should have had that talk long time ago, but it's never too late. And now she's finally admitted her feelings to herself, it was perfect!
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Chapter 12 is up!
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That was perfect!! Arthur is always full of understanding. I really liked how she gave him to read her diary. It's one of the most personal things and now she's finally able to share everything with him. I also liked how they went to their bench. So cute! Didn't miss Doctor Who or Spiderman reference either, icing on the cake!
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fdarcy said:
I enjoyed this chapter, I do hope that Arthur and will throw a wedding reception and invite all.
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Chapter 13 is up!
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fdarcy said:
I loved and enjoyed this chapter, it had everything in it a little crying and a lot of laughing on my part. I can't wait for the tea to see Uther's reaction to seeing them in their home. This should be very telling.
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Arthur's little add to the diary was one of the most adorable things ever!! It's great how they are so interested in each other's life, and coming to work, being so proud and all.. Amazing. And Gwen's comment about Alpha was priceless. I could imagine Arthur making a loaf, it's too cute!
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fdarcy said:
Lovely, but as they say at the theater, Encore, encore, while the audience ( the other readers and I) applause uproariously. Thank you.
This final chapter was very good, Uther's acceptance to the marriage priceless.
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Yes, thank you, and you're welcome! I forgot to post that the final chapter is up!
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Percival as Thor. Yeah, i can totally see that.
And this was lovely. I loved the idea of wedding reception with everyone there. And their little special private moments. Thank you for Uther finally seeing some sense.
And this was a wonderful story, Kim. You made something quite unrealistic into the most beautiful and well, realistic story. *not very good with words late at night but I adored the story*
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Glad you all liked it.
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arwentko1 said:
Just finished reading this story and I liked the way it ended with the promise of a beautiful future. Thank you for such a great story.
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