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I always love reading A/G texts to each other. They are totally at ease with each other.
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fdarcy said:
I do agree their texts are so good. Arthur it is time you start believing and admitting that you are in love, head over heels in love.
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Ugh, gotta vent. Have gotten 2 anonymous reviews (so I don't even know why I'm letting it annoy me) telling me that this story is getting "boring" and "frustrating."

Okay, I will give them "frustrating." If I was only reading it, I'd probably be like, "Oh, come on, WHEN?" too.

But I truly feel bad for this person/these people (I suspect it's the same reviewer both times, but I can prove nothing) if they are BORED by reading about Arthur and Gwen forming a good, strong relationship (in spite of Arthur's considerable issues).

I know what this person wants. And I also feel bad for them if they can only stay interested in a story that has smut in every other chapter.

It almost makes me want to make A&G NEVER HAVE SEX. Almost.

Oh yeah, the second review said the story was getting boring and frustrating, but they still "trust me." Yeah, whatever. If it's boring, stop reading it. End of problem.

I'm done now.
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lailastar said:
KB, I love every story you have written and enjoying this one too, don't ever stop writing. I love this Arthur for some reason, maybe because the story is being told from his point of view..I enjoyi watching him tie up himself in Guinevere. I am a sucker for love stories and happy endings. Thanks
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Oh I've seen those comments. I respect criticsm, but only when it is stated with arguments. And I think these were stated with horniness. Hence, I ignore them. If they cannot see the depth of the story, that's their problem. Even more, their loss.
I'd say, ignore them, and I'd stay with that, but sometimes they just get on your nerve. I mean, have your opinion, but don't say something is boring only because it doesn't have smut, yet. Shallow..
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I agree with Millie. Love their texts. And Arthur is so adorable. So crazy about her, it's cute.
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I am ignoring them. But it was bugging me today, and I knew this was a safe place to vent.

Telling someone that their story is "boring" is just rude, I'm sorry. I agree with you, Joppa. Have an opinion, but be prepared to back it up.
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Chapter 42:
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fdarcy said:
I can only say I am sorry for the stupid review but, they have a choice read or not read. What they fail to understand is that you are doing us a favour by writing stories for our enjoyment and for that they should be thankful as I am and countless others are. I guess that they do not understand the premise of this story since they are a bit dense. Thank you for another wonderful story.
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Interesting timing on it, too, considering the events of this latest chapter. Almost made me not want to post it.

Thank you all for your support and kind words!
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I agree with Joppa. Clearly these people are only interested in smut than anything else. I'm really enjoying A/G getting to know each other without having sex yet.

Now I'm off to read the new chapter!
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Woohoo! Finally lol! Lovely build up to A/G having sex and it was totally worth the wait! I really enjoyed them waiting and getting to know each other before taking that step.

Great job Kim!
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fdarcy said:
Now that they have consummated their relationship what's next? Lets see Arthur work now in finding his way out of this curse. Loved the timing.
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arwentko1 said:
Kim I have enjoyed the daily posts (I think I'm spoiled now though), and have been really enjoying them getting to know each other before having sex. Thank you again for all you do.

As fdarcy said I can't wait to see how Arthur is going to find his way out of the curse.
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I agree, totally spoiled with these daily updates!

I see now why it made you almost not want to post this. LoL Thank god on almost!
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Chapter 43:
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Lovely, sexy chapter! I have a feeling that Merlin may appear soon, hopefully he may help Arthur with his curse.
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fdarcy said:
This was worth the wait, just like Arthur said he got to know her first as a person and therefore this was indeed special.
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They're certainly making up for the 'lost time'. And Arthur's new holiday is super amusing. Smart man.
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Arina0122 said:
Thank you, for a wonderful story. The daily updates are and were greatly appreciated and will be missed. However, I truly understand your family comes first and other commitments; will be waiting patiently for next update.

Although, I was happy that Arthur was not in a rush to have sex with Gwen; I kept wondering why. It was plain as day and I missed it. Thanks for that.

As a side note on FanFiction, I follow you under lynn2262.

Thanks again
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Chapter 44:
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Arina0122 said:
Thank you, Kim for this chapter and perfect update. I am so happy with Arthur right now. Yeah, Merlin.
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fdarcy said:
Now Merlin is in, loved the mention of Gaius as both their doctor. Arthur hasn't yet put it together that this is Hunith's son who has just told him that he will be Okay. What he has now admitted is that he is totally in love and what I loved is that he was going to tell Gwen everything and I do hope once she is out of the hospital he tells her all.
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Wow a lot happened in that chapter! Finally we meet Merlin but not as I expected which was awesome! I'm so happy that Arthur decided to tell Gwen and admitted to himself that he loves Gwen.
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What a chapter!! I don't know what I loved more, Arthur deciding to tell her everything, him being sick with worry, Merlin ( adored him!!!) or Arthur finally admitting to himself he's in love.. Perfect!
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Arina0122 said:
When I read this yesterday I was so excited words failed me. A few of the things I love about Arthur in this chapter. 1) He decided to tell Gwen about the curse. 2) The way he took care of her when he found her 3) the way he would not leave at the hospital unitl Alice kicked him out 4) he called Gwen his best friend. 5) he admitted to himself he loved her.

Funny, Gwen in pain stops to check out Arthur's work. Gwen irritated and inpatient with Arthur.

Just a note: I had appendicitis and that test Arthur did; the doctor did on me. Arthur's right about you don't easily forget it. And to say might hurt, is an understatement.

Also, Merlin saying you are the boyfriend "for now" can be good as well as bad. I think he gave him double hope.
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I haven't had appendicitis, but I had front-row seats when my best friend had it in college.
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Chapter 45:
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fdarcy said:
A nice and thoughtful Uther, who knew. Loved Merlin and Arthur's little chat and Arthur doings Gwen's laundry. how lovely.
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I really loved the chat between Arthur and Merlin. Merlin gave him good advice. Uther's gift to Gwen was sweet and surprising and made me laugh. It's good to see his texting skills improving.
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fdarcy said:
I know that you can't say but I do believe that the fact that he fell in love and is willing to trust not only himself and to trust in Gwen is what will brake the curse.
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That's what's been so entertaining for me during this one: hearing everyone's theories.
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Again, I adore Merlin!! And Arthur is so confused and so sweet.. This story is like a drug..
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Joppa, does it make sense now?
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Does what make sense? I know it wasn't directed at me.
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Yes, it totally does!! And I love how you wrapped it all up and that there is a code among magic users. It's brilliant!
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Conversation on PM. I told Joppa that Merlin isn't going to lift the curse for Arthur and that there was a reason. I didn't tell her the reason. But she knows now.
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Chapter 46:
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fdarcy said:
No Arthur you will have a lifetime with her. Loved every word of this chapter, my next guess to braking the curse is that Arthur has to think of others more than himself be honest and stop being selfish.
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Oh okay Kim.

Lovely new chapter! I agree with Joppa, I like that there are rules amongst magic. I also think that Arthur should hopefully work out what Merlin meant by his words of wisdom.
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I loved the texting between Merlin and Arthur. Banter and yet serious enough. I also can't wait for Gwen to find out..
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Chapter 47:
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What a lovely way to wake up on my birthday! Now Arthur knows his heart belongs to Gwen I hope we see him fight the curse.
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Happy birthday, Millie!
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Thanks Kim. I feel old now, 25 yet people think I'm like 17. I get that from my dad, he doesn't look his age either.
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I don't want to hear about you feeling old at 25. I'll be 39 in a few months. (But luckily I don't look my age either)
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Happy Birthday!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! I'd say you're lucky you don't look your age, but I have the same problem (and I hate it XD). One day we'll be garetful..
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Taking a photo with a heart. That's a nice idea.. I am glad he has strongly dedcided to tell her the truth. And that Sefe has seen the change. He always thinks she's gonna leave him once she finds out. Interesting.
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fdarcy said:
There are so many cute moments in this chapter; taking a photo with my heart and wanting to see the little poke holes, I just loved them.
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fdarcy said:
Happy belated birthday, may the only thing you every have to worry about is looking younger than you are.
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Hehe! I do worry that I'm still 25 and have never gone on a date with a guy! But oh well I'm travelling around Europe at the moment for the second time in my life so that's great.
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LoL Millie, you give me hope in my own unexisting live life!
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Chapter 48:
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Oh Arthur I just cuddle you! I hope he tells her after she is better though. She deserves to know and I'm happy that Arthur wants to fight the curse.
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I agree Millie. Cuddling Arthur sounds tempting.. So does Mexican food.. But I always take/ have my aunt make me unspicy. I'm not used to it at all. And he is so sweet taking care of her and unofficially moving in. Subtle..
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Chapter 49:
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fdarcy said:
Chapter 48: I loved how Arthur remembered all his dates so sweet.
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fdarcy said:
Now that he has decided to tell her tomorrow I can't wait to see her reaction she maybe a little hurt but I think she will hang in there and help to find an answer to helping Arthur with the curse.
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There has been a lot of improvement from Arthur's side since the beginning. Nothing radical and yet it is. I love it. Now I'm anxiously waiting for Gwen's reaction.
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I'm glad Arthur is going to tell Gwen.
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Chapter 50:
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fdarcy said:
Wow!! loved this chapter, Gwen's reaction and acceptance and understanding of the entire situation was just perfect. Very beautifully written.
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I'm glad that Arthur told Gwen and she reacted just as I expected. What she said about Morgana is true but Arthur is right when he said Morgana wants to cause others pain.
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Damn that was beautiful!!! Her reaction was amazing, just like her.. i knew this was going to be good, but it actually exceeded my expectations.
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Arina0122 said:
Thank you, Gwen's responds was just wonderful. She tired to be strong for Arthur; while hiding her pain. And then falling apart in his arms was so heartbreaking and sad and wonderful; just full of so much emotion over this chapter. Also, thank you again, for answering my unasked question. I kept thinking by cursing Arthur, Morgana was causing the pain of so many women. It just seemed wrong I couldn't figure out why she would do it.
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Next set:
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