Aizen The Proposal Remix One

violagal posted on Nov 05, 2009 at 01:32AM
there i was me in front of grimmjow staring into his liquid brown eyes staring in mine. "carolinia resden will you marry me " grimmjow asked as he knelt down . "i-i-i-i will have too think about it"i said later that day i was in my dorm there was a loud knock on the door. "hello?" i answered it was keska all of a sudden there was a sharp pain in my lower back then everything went black....


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lebih dari setahun yang lalu violagal said…
big smile
awesome!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!link
lebih dari setahun yang lalu isabellschiffer said…
hmmm
your writing is very good but you will have to work on your characters personalities, sorry!
lebih dari setahun yang lalu violagal said…
angry
well sorry 4 not being like your not so well written but good story's geez link
lebih dari setahun yang lalu isabellschiffer said…
well all i am saying is that Grimmjow would never get down on his knees and propose he would probably have a hard time expressing his deep feeling of love towards Carolinia.. im not saying you shouldnt continue please go on!
lebih dari setahun yang lalu violagal said…
angelic
mmm okay your right excuse my bad behavior hey i got an idea lets be friends
lebih dari setahun yang lalu isabellschiffer said…
Sure!
lebih dari setahun yang lalu violagal said…
smirk
sike !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! you dont treat my friends like that
lebih dari setahun yang lalu violagal said…
meh
or maybe not cat we will see
lebih dari setahun yang lalu isabellschiffer said…
rainy
u know its against the Order to call me that.
lebih dari setahun yang lalu demon_wolf said…
big smile
I liked it. I thought it was good. It changed up how everyone else writes, like they stick with the characters personality. I really liked it. ^^